In my recent reading, I came across two passages written almost a century apart about big business. Together they offer mature high school students and adults an opportunity to do close analysis of a text.
These two sentences are from English novelist John Galsworthy writing in his 1928 novel Swan Song, which is part of his famous Forsyte Saga.
One sees more and more…the really dangerous people are not the politicians, who want things with public passion—that is, mildly, slowly; but the big business men who want things with private passion strenuously, quickly. They know their own minds; and if we don’t look out they’ll wreck the country.
This sentence comes from historian Philipp Blom in his 2015 book Fracture: Life and Culture in the West 1918-1938:
Today, a real revolution would have to turn not against the seat of government but against the headquarters of the corporations whose political, social, and cultural influence has so vastly increased that presidents and prime minister seem to be little more than decorated puppets placed at center stage for cosmetic purposes.
Directions for students
Both these quotations warn that big business is dangerous.Examine the two author’s comments carefully. To help you analyze the comments, consider these questions:
- Are their reasons for fearing big business the same?
- Is the threat they perceive identical?
- Do they each define big business the same way?
- Is big business the only threat the writers see?
- Do they suggest some fears that they don’t state?
- If you hadn’t been given the date of each quote, is there internal evidence that would let you tell which is the earlier?
The formal writing prompt
Write an informative/expository text in which you discuss three reasons why, according to the writers, big business poses a potential danger to the their countries. Be sure you explain what the danger would look like if it became a reality. Would it, for example, ruin the economy or cause a revolt that would topple the government?
Please keep your text to no more than 550 words.
You can use bare bones writing skeleton™ like this to organize your thoughts:
- Big business is dangerous because [reason 1]
- Big business is dangerous because [reason 2]
- Big business is dangerous because [reason 3]
Make sure your reasons don’t overlap.
Note to teachers
Students won’t have trouble preparing the writing skeleton™, but they will have difficulty coming up with more than just the writing skeleton. They have to dig deeper to figure out the deeper significance of the phrasing the authors use. In work by good writers, the details matter.
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